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WE ALL CIRCLE TIS WINDY

CIRCLES
We as does the wind
keep circling
as whirl winds
at times very cold
slowly warming till we hasten circling
what the wind
no no no
ourselves all should by now know
circling makes us all glow
we like the Thames Nile and other rivers flow
then off we go to blow
as the wind often whistles
does follow
but loud
not soft
so lie low

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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people circle around and around, it's just more blowhard stuff! While the wind whistles, everybody should just lie low, because sometimes it's just whistling in the dark. ~ Geez.
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thank you Gee long time no wind no blow may any day now go lol oh no not yet

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They ain't about to get me yet! Recovering little by little. ~ Geez.
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were u ill better now hoppingly lol

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Yeah, had bad cold, and now on the mend
~ Geez.
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I think I am in awe of the ethereal beauty of your work. You invite me to de-link from language and leap into pure instinct and imagery and all the feels...

Jamie

no need of any awe really
as you speak spiritually
I naturally

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