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Warmer side of Life

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2022-12-30 10:38

Why get out of bed
when she is with you

it's more than coffee
when she gives you warmth

it's like choco
more than toffee
but depends on
how you like it
sleeping with
mom sis
or
miss
one who loves to
kissssssssssss.......

.lol

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
FUN OR FUNNY POEMIE
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2023-01-01 14:51

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I like the change you made to the title

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Sun, 2023-01-01 23:50

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for your lovely observation ..
Hope Steve is well....

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Dystopia

Thu, 2023-01-05 00:25

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This poem is short, sweet and wonderful! Thanks for a happy “warm” read on a cold day!

lovedly

Thu, 2023-01-05 00:31

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maiden visit What a pleasure

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