Wall Flower

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Submitted by RoseBlack on Sat, 2023-03-04 15:33

Shrinking violet
Against the wall
Emotional autopilot
Laughter down the hall

Love me
Like you love her
Passion rolling like the sea
The heart's connoisseur

Watching from afar
Never meant to be
Wishing on a star
Why can't you see

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

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Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Sat, 2023-03-04 19:16

Wow Carrie! I'm so impressed with your poetry at the moment! That first stanza..... wow! A+ and 10/10

Sat, 2023-03-04 20:14

I found a lot of good resources online to help improve my writing along with all the guidance from my neo family. Glad you enjoyed.

~RoseBlack~

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Mon, 2023-03-06 05:37

Cool pattern. I like the total rhyme and the short syllable count. This works for me

Tim

Mon, 2023-03-06 09:46

I am having fun playing with words, rhyme etc.

~RoseBlack~

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