Written a very good poem about a very difficult subject. One would hope two people could effectively communicate their needs honestly but it is really difficult and we are all traumatized in different ways and we all cope differently too. I have the most wonderful partner here. As husband and wife we miscommunicate and feelings can get hurt but we talk it out. When we have to have difficult conversations I feel that we communicate really effectively and listen carefully. This took two decades of working at it and we both were willing participants in our growth. I wish everyone could feel supported the way I do in my romantic relationship. I’m sorry for your struggles in this department.

I noticed a typo

“Just one last kiss as he told me he (loved) me”

Correction in parentheses. I believe this is a simple typographical error. I wouldn’t change anything else it is very readable. I like the flow, the rhythm, the rhyme; all well thought out. I like the line repeated at the end, a strong reaffirmation of the central theme.

Sorry about that longing, I’ll be hoping for your happiness,
Tim

a certificate of participation for for entry to the challenges, your title should appear this way: [I am presuming the challenge]
Waiting Room - 'Fool Again' A quirk in our programing, we are trying to resolve. Thank you, The certificate is printable and suitable for framing. [Also for bragging rights and showing off to friends!] Your poem is one that unfortunately, is all too recognizable. Especially when it involves an 'old fool', for as we know, "there is no fool like an old fool". Nice job! Clear story and well told! ~ Geezer.
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