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waffler's ..lilll Frency .. romance

DANCE ROMANCE IN FRANCE
We dance...
.as if in romance....
we feel ...we are free in France....
we prance....
we dance exercise romance...

we feel lighter
than the weight we carry.....
as we cross the floor
and
love to lay once more...
lay, yes...
as else we will be left unknown....
not having left a progeny....

so come dance
along the globe with me...

let's dance and romance....
as if we were both in France...
a prance..
freely .dance
as if we are in
traumatic
ROMANCE,
LET'S DANCE.....

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Free verse
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Comments

Write something with meaning .... you can do better than this
Give me something good that I can convert to a sonnet ... I need some inspiration :-)
Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

prattle degradation improve I shall wait a moment
judy

author comment

'degradation improve' - love it
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

shall with ur guidance judy

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