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the visitation and the invitation

Part 1 ~ The Visitation

There's only so much life in entropy
though you and I walked the same distance,
tears too easily unspared, the heart
too willing to burn out like a star into
its own dark matter.

We are quiet in our disassembling, no shouting
with fists of grief, nothing is left to feed the
voice within, steadfast with our impressions in the
fallen snow we leave behind.

Do not speak, my Beloved. Do not move just yet.
Your
body warm against mine, the joy of you separating
the darkness from the light.

I do not know where words come from.

Part 2 ~ The Invitation

He says "you're killing me"
as a reply to just about everything,
she knows this is true,
but it's not her doing,
never was
to be sure;
it is him being undone
by the tempestuous ordinary;

she is howling inside his tangled bloodlines,
he answers her call with jacaranda blooms.

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Comments

I hope all your readers of this poem do check out the link you have supplied. The flower blossoms are beautiful. (I love lavender!) it is very nice to have you back with us writing again.
My favorite lines:

There's only so much life in entropy
though you and I walked the same distance,
tears too easily unspared, the heart
too willing to burn out like a star into
its own dark matter.

I have no suggestions, only appreciation for the work.

always, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Thank you Cat for reading and commenting, as you have on this poem and many others. I thank you and those who left comments but never thanked as I should have.

However, dear Cat, I will only look into Neopoet's windows from time to time and perhaps post an occasional poem.

Wishing you health, love and happiness.

~A

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