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Vindication
Sweet vindication
cleanses all those futile thoughts
Everlasting strength
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Structured: Eastern
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words:
I'm back! So happy to be back as myself! Missed all my lovely Neopoet friends. Big hugs xxxx
This is my first Haiku ever- trying new things.
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-12 06:22
dear Kat,
your first haiku is brilliant! I love it. the message is Hopeful! a good way to start the day! welcome back!!!
*hugs, Cat
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:17
Thanks so much my dear friend....
Thank you so much my dear friend!
I missed you xxxxx
Kat
author commentSeren
Sun, 2023-02-12 06:40
Dear Ekaterina
This is a really good Haiku.
Well done for a first go!!!
King regards Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:17
Thanks Jayne!
This means a lot coming from someone as talented as you xxx
Kat
author commentSeren
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:46
Sweets
I'm nothing special. There are some massive talents here. One just above us. My sweet Sis.
Hugs xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:52
Don't ever....
Don't ever say that again young lady!
You are special and talented- and deserve all the accolades you have recieved!
Much love Xxxx
author commentRoseBlack
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:18
Haiku
One of my favorite types of poetry...well done!
~RoseBlack~
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 07:44
Thank you my beautiful friend....
Thank you my beautiful friend.... love you lots and lots.
Thanks for always supporting me Xxxx
author commentJackweb
Sun, 2023-02-12 09:08
A very lovely poem!
Haiku, a practice of artistic discipline, the haiku's minimal nature requires poets to pare down to only the essentials- making each word, or even syllable, count.
The title appeals to my taste. Exquisite!
Welcome back!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 09:34
Thank you so much my dear friend!
Thank you so much dear Onyinyechi for all your support with everything!
I feel very blessed to have you as a friend Xxx
author commentGeezer
Sun, 2023-02-12 10:06
Great job...
on your first Haiku! Welcome back. ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 19:09
Thank you Geezer
Thank you Geezer- it's good to be back!
author commentRosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-02-12 14:46
Haiku is tough
You’ve got 17 syllables to say what needs saying. Pretty good job, especially for a first attempt.
Tim
Ekaterina Alexa...
Sun, 2023-02-12 17:11
Thanks
Thanks Tim!
author commentlovedly
Mon, 2023-02-13 01:22
yes good
but where have you been no readings....
Ekaterina Alexa...
Mon, 2023-02-13 01:47
It's a very long story!
It's a very long story! I'll send you a message. I missed you though my dear friend Xxx
author commentDalton
Fri, 2023-03-24 17:32
Dear Honor
I find it difficult to compose well executed haiku I see it as a snapshot of a moment frozen in time like a photograph in words. It’s an ancient form of writing usually set in the natural world but of course humans are part of nature too. I admire what you’ve created here and nice to go back to an earlier piece. I’ll be posting a few of my older haiku at some point though they don’t fulfil the requirements of the 5-7-5 formula call them extracts perhaps instead of haiku. Yours works perfectly regards John xxx