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VANCOUVER MISSED JULY CONTEST

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-07-26 17:35

TIME BETRAYS

sad time betrayed me
the storm that day
denied my
RIGHT
delayed my flight
then they said
NO FLIGHT
Just imagine my plight
you might

no chance now in this life
the clouds have come again
in Niagara may not still rain
I know
as I am standing outside the met office
their MODELS
aren't now matching

today mostly lovely nudes
leave their bikinis loose
lest it rains

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
MY TWO PENCE WORTH FREE VERSE...
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
Summertime Blues
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Tue, 2022-07-26 23:26

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would be; that the great falls would tear the rags from those models and embarass the whole bunch of them! Imagine,
canceling the great lovedly's flight! How dare they? ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Wed, 2022-07-27 00:20

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be a delight
4get the flight
saved my plight
who
they not you

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