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Your Kindness Neo’s

You are forever so kind
all hearts swell
when all are read
what will happen
when all is lost in the pages of NEO
out from the distant heaven …
all will see …
my Lords who still read

Many have forgotten the harp string …
when they could in hearts, a bell ring…
and
read what was composed with abandon ….
many poets still do it though
but seldom …..

let’s walk the walk of time…
as lonely strangers …
not like dogs
in lonely mangers….

never decry humans …
all know it ….
those that walk along
lead them to the end of eternity ….
‘tis the ultimate heaven…
the whole world can see …
but fellow friends
still abide
do read
comment whenever you are free

as time runneth out …
minds often go blank …
but still deserve in your hearts
an immortal rank…

Well assured
but by a minuscule few
still all must expect
what is their due…

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

You have boldly pointed out. The "ignored" and "neglected" are everywhere. There are not many volunteers either. Thank you for raising your voice.

xxxxx

is to say
what I do know
rest of its own does flow
as we all in time's
cobweb grow
All Neo's know

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pick and choose
Johnny eat your beans
Margareth eat your carrots
The plate is full
My heart is full
captian my captian

Out!
Out!
Spot!

aluminum tray
plastic triangular
or square
the color midden
of sustenance of
soul...Its pudding
and pressed pasty
flesh of protien
do we desire all
of it too ingest in
our track to digest

pine forest nuts
in olive oil is a taste
for the mundane fare
pallete to excuse a
withdrawal of edible
function...
yet chocolate pudding
with cake..(Swansons
Lonely Man dinners the best)
we devour...

as any place for fortifying
the verb and noun daily
intake to nourish and
flourish the mind and
vocabular...It is most
proper to taste the
supper....to show respect
and become an upper

Well.blah...dee Do
Do read...as somewhat
confounded it is
a comment is something
Imagine getting homework
back in school with no
mark...no comment...
an F was an F..
but we are not graded here
nor should we...
artistic merit..with the
instructional vend per Workshoppe
prevails..
comments are the
evidence that we are
working...
like a paper...
not just reading my horrorscope
or tittering at the funnies
Or the Obits..or the opinion
or the fabricated propoganda
of news...Or sales...
Pirate eye Patch and Parrot
Fifty phrases..Selling at good
price..One size fits all!
No...I make my way every
few week or so with comments
as looney as these dispatches
but it is participation
(of an allsorts kind)
of mind..

enough!
I must be going
That is all...

Thank U!

and your poetry is
sole
my mind is now a
BLACKENED HOLE

author comment

so its pure...like oak barrels for putting in whiskey to be
aged!

Thank U!

I assure you
all poets would have been frisky
and
there wouldn't have been any poetry
all loitering in jolly
happy go lucky mood
who would then
compose poems
O dude

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