The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "A Tribute to Mother" does a good job of capturing the selflessness and love of a mother. The ocean imagery used in the first two lines sets a nice tone for the rest of the poem, which describes the emotional weight and tireless effort of a mother in protecting and providing for her child. The use of repetition, particularly in the line "with her unselfishness portray," emphasizes the theme of sacrifice and highlights the mother's unwavering dedication to her child.

However, there are a few areas where the poem could be improved. The use of the word "pray" in the line "Of a mother's instinct pray" feels a bit out of place and could be replaced with a word that better fits the flow and tone of the poem. Additionally, the poem occasionally feels a bit disjointed, as if the lines were written separately and then pieced together. It may benefit from some additional editing to create a smoother, more cohesive flow.

Overall, "A Tribute to Mother" is a heartfelt poem that effectively captures the love and sacrifice of a mother. With a bit of tweaking, it could become an even stronger piece of writing.

Suggested line edit:
"Of a mother's instinct pray" could be changed to "Her mother's instinct on display" for a smoother flow and more natural phrasing.

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Hello, Hon,
This poem feels so tender and sincere. It shows much love, adoration, and respect for mothers everywhere. Beautiful.
L

is a heartfelt poem of praise that could use a little bit of work, to make it a thunderous applause for mothers everywhere.
I think that there is room for improvement by eliminating some words
and adding to some lines. One instance is: "It is written on the distinction of her face".
The word [distinction] isn't needed here; if you want to make a clearer vision of her face,
you might say: It is written on the [lines] of her face.

"passing up and down the pace", doesn't have any context with the line before or after.
How about, "keeping up with the frantic pace".

"fighting through the heavy thunderstorm way" could be altered to:
[though there be thunderstorms in the way]

Think about the words that you are putting together, do they make sense?
Are they more than words that sound alike to make a rhyme?
I think that you can do better than this. ~ Geezer.
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