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TONIGHTS DELIVERY

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-01-19 18:39

Do not oversleep

do not dream

all my poems are born through the night

I feel I'm tapping keys

but I drink red wine

blood flourishes me

in the morning I wake up

brush off my dream

never scream

then through my veins

flows my verse

you ask is it a verse

I say worse

then you clap for me

look me up in a library

did you ever find me

say something I may believe

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Ray Whitaker

Fri, 2022-01-21 16:03

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I read your piece here a few times. Seems like a “trail of consciousness “ sort of thing. Thanks for posting this.

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lovedly

Mon, 2022-02-07 21:07

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I was brushing laps teeth and came across your awakening
thanks to the rays you shower

on to be poets
one is me

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scribbler

Tue, 2022-02-08 12:24

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I'll leave the truth saying to those who say it much better than I. Like you a great deal of my chicken scratchings begin in the late hours of night

lovedly

Tue, 2022-02-08 13:01

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The night belongs to poets
You know the rest
on Neo being the best

I still try
thanks

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