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Today I feel

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2018-05-19 00:18

Today I feel a life has been wasted
in timeless talk (with) those unknown
many times my free style they've tasted
of a poet known(unknown) wanting to be reknown

so now I shall eat only popcorn
till Stan does finally on Neo return
and another fresh day is born
as I wouldn't (appreciate) my fingers to burn

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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scribbler

Sat, 2018-05-19 07:53

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Well, I'm not fully back but I'm not as far away as I once was. So heat the butter for the pop corn......stan

lovedly

Sat, 2018-05-19 13:18

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kick the knee
and
come over here
for pops corns
Stan our poetic
neo -new
deer
YOUR POETRY ALL
WILL BEAR
HOPE YOU HEAR
LOL
lol
Lo L

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raj

Sat, 2018-05-19 13:39

I think the first stanza was good but you lost your way after that...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

lovedly

Sat, 2018-05-19 18:48

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u r right
I wasn't in mood
nor bright
so in composing it
I gave up delight
how right

soonly
I'd get it outta sight

and as and when I appear bright

u r right
I wasn't in mood
nor bright
so in composing it
I gave up delight
how right

soonly
I'd get it outta
all sight

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