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Toasty Tootsies,

Submitted by Obadiah Grey on Sun, 2021-11-14 09:19

As winter slaps the arse autumn
and lambs no-longer bleat.
I'm glad I saw these socks n bought 'em--

I've got reeaally frigid feet.

Obi.

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Ray Whitaker

Sun, 2021-11-14 18:04

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Your sense of humor is well expressed in your writing..

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Geezer

Mon, 2021-11-15 07:31

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make sense and stick with you, because, while funny they are so true! ~ Geez.
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Obadiah Grey

Tue, 2021-11-16 14:04

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I've since learned to inhale through my nose
and exhale through my arse!

Thanks fer the comments chaps.

Obi.

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Mark

Thu, 2021-11-18 10:28

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Another real pleasure Obi.
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Owl Has My Soul

Thu, 2021-11-18 20:11

I would love to read your take on Greeting Cards...

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