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At times it often happens
when two poets on any site
seemingly serve the masters
one comes across the other
one, comments
the other replies
well master reply as faster
ere the wilderness thinks
you have gone slow
and
the other poet instead of poetry
has gone to mow
Okay, sow
seeds with another
someone who may be faster
so reply as fast as you can
to a lady O man
or to a rascal
Lady if you can
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jane210660
Tue, 2016-06-07 10:21
Do you know, I was just
Do you know, I was just thinking that.........
but you got there faster :-)
I'm on the computer a lot today, trying to write, emphasis on trying, think I'll give up and make yet another coffee - would you like one or would you prefer a cuppa? Jx
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lovedly
Tue, 2016-06-07 12:57
I drink only with my eyes
I love all those who offer champagne
but are wise
they say sorry not today
have a soda you may
wise guys
they save
for their rainier days
and say
we shall come over
to your place
author commentalidzain
Wed, 2016-06-08 04:10
yap
still here. I bet there are some of the new members sharing that same thinking too.
Alid
lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-08 04:33
yeah I just found a great poetess
new won
but very interesting one
author commentKeith Logan
Wed, 2016-06-08 06:45
Loved
My you are slow, if you had not noticed the gentlewoman before. She has already shared a good many fine poems here.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-08 06:50
not slow
dumb like a log of wood
damped to be dumped
now I am reading hers
all one by one
thanks sir for reminding me
of my inability
I love folks
who help
like thee
author commentKeith Logan
Wed, 2016-06-08 07:13
Loved
Always at my leasure
‘tis meet to share a treasure,
especially if the measure
is one of greatest pleasure.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-08 07:45
thanks keith I'll
RE MEM BER
author commentjane210660
Wed, 2016-06-08 08:37
You both just made me smile,
You both just made me smile, what an accolade to live up to, blimey, I daren't have an off day now :-)
Now where did that dratted muse go...............? Jx
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lovedly
Wed, 2016-06-08 09:33
you needn't have to
those who are the busiest
are the happiest
author commentKeith Logan
Wed, 2016-06-08 20:15
Jane
Now don’t be feeling crapy
nor even very flappy,
your writing's always snappy,
so says the happy chappy.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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jane210660
Thu, 2016-06-09 05:18
Lol
Thanks Keith. Jx
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