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Through a lifeline

Through any
lifeline it
doesn’t matter
how long .
We must thrive
and stand strong
as time pulls
us along .
so
we stand up
and strive
by being
alive.

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that this one needs a little bit more focus. It seems strained. ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

yes i thought so to
it’s hard for me to focus i easily get distracted like when im writing i hear a sound that breaks my concentration and when i back to writing the thought of the poem has completely retreated out of my brain. and i have to start over again

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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