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THEY LAST
Those who care to reach till the last
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
BULLET POEM EACH WORD COUNTS
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-05-01 13:07
dear lovedly,
this is a wonderful thought for the day!
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sun, 2022-05-01 13:55
Thank you Cats
First sunny Sunday
they told me
all are asleep
maintain silence
hence a liner only
one bullet
lol
Geezer
Sun, 2022-05-01 14:32
Reaching...
for the stars, holding on to the moon for support. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2022-05-01 19:36
great Geezzzzzzzzzzzzzz
yes the moon is a good base
many stars within space
lol