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THERE FOR YOU

Submitted by turbo1904 on Sat, 2022-05-28 05:12

I wish you peace
on hectic days,
If it's dark and gloomy;
I hope you catch some rays.

If you ever feel sad,
I hope a smile appears,
I hope you conquer your
demons and face your fears.

I wish you courage
if you begin to doubt,
I want you to have it all;
never be without.

I never want you to
feel sorrow or pain,
Sunshine and blue skies
never see the rain.

I wish you the truth;
I hope you never hear a lie,
I want you too never
give up; always try.

I want your dreams and wishes
all to come true,
If you ever need me
I'm there for you.

TURBO 2021 ♥

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Structured: Western
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Not actively editing
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Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-05-28 05:26

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your title is good it is reflected in the poem. your pacing is very good as the poem flows very smoothly. I liked the lines equally and could not choose favorites. Keep up the good work!

*hugs, Cat

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turbo1904

Sat, 2022-05-28 06:05

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Hello Cat, this was the first poem I wrote. I recently retired and divorced. It has been a rough couple of years. I so look forward to your comments. Thank you for your support, it means a lot.

Best Wishes,
Turbo1904

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-05-28 06:13

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thank you for your kindness, it put a smile on my face!

*hugs, Cat

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Obadiah Grey

Sat, 2022-05-28 09:24

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Its a good poem that made me feel peaceful and relaxed, well done!

A few grammatical errors perhaps and slight slippage in syntax but hey, Its poetry!

Cheers, Obi.

turbo1904

Sat, 2022-05-28 21:34

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Thank you for the comment. My grammar is a little off key. I will deliver the message. Thanks again.

Best Wishes
Turbo1904

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