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Sweetness you are missed (Like a SUNUKU)

Sweetness you are missed

Sunku
has taken over the
Neo's full page

Sweetness
of real poetry
has been deranged

None read
generic poems
Why compose them

Amen

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

We don't get many poems about Neopoet! Maybe this one could have been a blog instead, but I understand your frustration (at least it seems like frustration) that there are so many sunku submissions right now. I still hope you will feel excited to see that all these sunku submissions mean that people are vigorously workshoping and learning! That's a dream come true for me.

Will be checking some of your other recent work when I can.

Take care,
Kelsey

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