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SUNKU HAYNAKU and PARI Style new creativity in Poetry

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2018-05-10 14:32

Haynaku, Eastern
and
Western, Sunku
And
‘Pari Style’
All new

Haynaku Eastern
and
Western Sunku
both now is new

very nice new thing
Haynaku

In the Western world
they have now introduced
Sunku

Three linesx3 paras
all abstract

first line 2 syllables
second three
and
third 4

just Google and see

Haynaku is also lovely
I will try composing
Freely

First line
one word
second line two
and
third three

No stress on syllables
will fit me

on another site I came across a
‘’Pari’’Sttyle Poetry

last words same ending
i.e. aaaaaaaa
like
Fruit... shoot... cute ...and ...parachute
Absolute

Do try these neopoets all
ye and wee

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

lovedly

Fri, 2018-05-11 13:09

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ROBERT BROWNING

He was the most authentic
Poet of love
and
I take after him

There is nothing
beyond this Life
nor
UNIVERSE

SO WHILE ON MOMMY EARTH
let us only love and enjoy
whilst we live
And
leave
a progeny behind

like you and me...
Remember LOVE
is only lovely
Like is
Lovedly

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lovedly

Tue, 2018-07-31 19:29

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removed a bad tooth

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-05-11 20:03

lovedly's picture

poetry has a myriad meaning

it gives inner strengths
to the lonely and needy
when needed
you have the acumen
welcome

b not afraid to give off your mind
those who may adversely comment
may oft be outta mind
so em don't mind

I have come along
for so long
you to the ilks like me also belong
sing your song
ding dong

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lovedly

Tue, 2018-07-31 15:04

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raj
ref rani parri

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raj

Tue, 2018-07-31 15:08

I had never heard about this Pari style which you have explained...sounds good...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

lovedly

Tue, 2018-07-31 15:13

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you'd show interest so just try
I don't have samples
but it ran something like this

come and play with me on the sand
let us roll over each other as plays the band
then heaven knows who on whom will land
and so on so on so on isn't it grand

raj sublime

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lovedly

Tue, 2018-07-31 19:31

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removed a bad tooth

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