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Summer Fun

Wow
Summer again was cold all along
a young chick remains glued to mom's tits he adorns
pair of sibling’s, young ones pulls each other’s hair for fun
Mom and pop are sunning at the beach
preparing for another summer’s lasting memorable one (for fun)

young upcoming teens wish to brush lips often
as they cross the permissible age
their love entwined has begun

another couple is smiling
the coming one is kicking her tummy
what a funny feeling

then can't forget aged one's
Grand kids need a change of nappy
granny is happy grand pa is feeling horny
where have those days gone
when they were under the blankets at darkness searching

Well all life is lovely since summer has for a while come
Let’s all have our kind of everlasting desirous fun
haven't you yet begun summer's pun

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Free verse
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A fun summer poem.........stan

or funny
stan
the neoman

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Best wishes for the contest Lovedly...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

stan and raj

my poems r only for humour and fun
western pun

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Amazing writing very fruitful like off the vine created from a masterful design
Loved the sheer meaning of its piece how you handled the word structure.
Simplistic to its message very free flowing no doubt structured you got here
United creativity in its piece very likeable message to impart

Mario Vitale

I am delighted as it comes from you
last minute I decided to enter
a fourth time
lost all earlier ones
by a hairs breadth only

hopeful this time

lol being funny

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A good snapshot of the differences in the way varied age folks spend their time at the beach

hope the judge is a sexy beachy man
hopes I maintain
He must also sustain

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There was some confusion
so now I have posted it afresh
CONTEST AUGUST
Hope I am in now

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