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Substitute Quickly ------edit still

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2023-01-07 12:30

Second hand
man woman
hubby or wife
all need a replacement early

a car
a cart
Audi
or
Cadilac

even a micro and drier
when all pack
the only answer is
to just em sack...

buy afresh
or
change
with your purse

cut your cloth
with new scissors
according to its worth
then
then
lay down flat ...
buttons open

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

Change when its a must

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Sat, 2023-01-07 12:40

After...

replacing two wives, I find that the one I have now is quite enough to keep me going.
I don't think I could keep up with a newer model, besides who wants to train another one?
~ Geez.
.,

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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lovedly

Sat, 2023-01-07 12:55

Ha ha Gee

while just composing this I did not at all have u in my mind I knew all
thnx friend

author comment

Lavender

Sat, 2023-01-07 17:21

Substitute...

carefully, to be sure - if at all. I'm determined to live with less "stuff."
Nice, Lovedly!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

Sat, 2023-01-07 19:11

Lol. I use it until it’s broken beyond repair. I buy new things of course. My cheaper imported guitars record as many songs as the pricey American ones. Our fancy coffee machine was hundreds of dollars and it pooped out in a few years. The old crusty one it replaced has regained its former heavyweight title.

Tim

lovedly

Sun, 2023-01-08 01:30