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A stranger

Submitted by Anna Severchuk on Mon, 2022-09-19 13:46

A stranger

In the venue where we met
I saw a stranger in the black.
I saw his eyes,
They were like ice.
I heard his voice,
It wasn’t noise.
I saw the wings on his back
And blood on his neck…
You could think I am a liar,
But I am sure it was a vampire!

Review Request (Intensity):

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Last few words:

Once again it is autumn and Halloween inspiration.

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Contest:

Neopoem Of The Week Contest September 18 to September 24th 2022

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

RoseBlack

Mon, 2022-09-19 17:58

A fun write

Beware of those vampires! They could be anywhere!

~RoseBlack~

Anna Severchuk

Fri, 2022-09-30 16:03

Thank you,Mark!

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Geezer

Tue, 2022-09-20 11:08

It is the time...

for the beasts in us... to come forth, to be scared of what we see in ourselves. I truly believe that the nightmares that we write about, are the things we fear reside in us! Good job of scaring us with that. ~ Geezer.
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Anna Severchuk

Fri, 2022-09-30 16:04