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Some words
Some don't move fast
Some barely crawl
Some finish last
Some, not at all
Some stagger
Some rock
Some barely can talk
Some full of emotion
Some half-handle it
Some are unfeeling
Some casually mock
Some happiness stealing
Some hard as rock
Some mean to stare
So mean how some glare
Some really don't care
Some don't give a shit
Some pay no attention
Some positive thought
Some eyes are open
Some see what they've got
Some show style with a smile
Some at least try for a while
So me, dispute the beguile
Some never quit
LenArt
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Enjoy
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2022-08-20 17:44
In order to submit...
to the Random Challenges contest, the title must be a reflection of one of the suggested titles given.
Objectives: If you so accept this challenge, all you have to do is choose one or more of the following topics and write one or more poems based on your choice or choices. Please make sure your poem or poems are between 12 to 32 lines. Certificates will be given to those that use the topic as their title. If you choose to use your own title, use the given topics by adding topic title in parenthesis.
Topics
1) Waiting room
2) At The Bar
3) I'm Back
4) Hidden Room
~Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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Jackweb
Sat, 2022-08-27 23:12
That's a good reminder.
Well stated Geezer. The poem was quite different from the challenge topics.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb