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SNOW GOD'S DREAM COMES TRUE

When God dreams next time //to him convey to tell me ///when it's my for ...what ?
Ah to dream w/o a scream...
Let him dream that the world is awarding ...
who?
ME ..not you...nor HIM...
...he has all the world at his feet...

As he is only dreaming on my behalf ...
ask him to bless all dreamers fast ...
as they are the engines of his real love...
to enable dreamers like you to hurry fast ///
and
from dreamers mast ----upon awake....guys like me ///his life long smile pass ...

Dream on friends /it's now snowing let angels fly the flag mast
humble me as the god you say
is for me dreaming

Good wishes he may
for that I shall pray
but convey to him
I don't for favors pay

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
WHEN HUMANS WISH GOD'S DREAM
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Not Explicit Content

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a dreaming "God" what an original thought...quite enlightened!

*love, Cat

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Gee said post a poem
'not to go in exile
so I thought 'twas not I who was dreaming
God must b

Thanks
you love
who ?
GOD

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As it turns out gods can die. A simple matter of nobody believes in them anymore. The Endless however, are just that. The lord of dreams Morpheus rules his realm. Dreams, Death, Destiny, Desire, Despair, Destruction, Delirium. As it turns out the waking world can’t really function without “the dreaming”. Humanity’s dreams are too important a part of it. It’s a cool story.

Your ambiguous style is also fitting for such an ethereal concept.
Tim

I know a great poet who converts my love poems usual kind to love of Divine.After three months I convinced him Sun if at all is god we all are part of solar energy ATOMS
electrons protons and neutrons He just nodded still says
that is

DIVINITY..

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I would dearly love to see you write something on the seven "D's" that you speak of. poem or prose, does not matter.
*respects, eddy styx

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Hello, Lovedly,
"...ask him to bless all dreamers fast, as they are the engines of his real love." I may not know exactly what you meant here, but it is interesting and philosophical. I agree, this is very original!
Lav

consequent to two poets conversation on and about god being a dreamer or not Thanks for the read Lavs

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