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smile haiku

baby face smiling

puppies with fast wagging tails

greetings at our home

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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This poem follows the traditional 5-7-5 syllable structure of a haiku, which is commendable. The imagery is clear and evokes a sense of joy and comfort. However, the connection between the lines could be strengthened. While the first two lines seem to create a picture of innocence and happiness, the third line, "arriving at home," seems somewhat disconnected. A suggestion would be to create a more explicit link between the images. For instance, the third line could be something like "bring warmth to our home," which directly ties back to the joyous images in the first two lines. Furthermore, the poem could benefit from the use of sensory details, which are a key element of haiku. Consider incorporating sounds, smells, or tactile sensations.

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Is adorable. Simple pleasures that create happiness. The feeling of arriving home and having someone or something glad to see you. I enjoyed this.


Hello, Mark,
I can feel the warmth in each of these things that make you smile. Delightful!

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