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to SIR jess with love
Why did you delete
and
repost
minus Lovedly
do you know
Sir Jess
the best guy in a CIRCUS
is the Joker
as in the ocean
trillions x trillionsxXXXX TRILLIONS drops churn
one pearl only
so does Lovedly
out of his machine gun poetry
churns a GEM only
and
that too is appreciated
by you lonely
sigularly
other gems you ignore
may perhaps even devour
some still ask for more
you often Lovedly abhor
but jess
my POETIC master
for that alone
I love your invaluable gesture
much more
your criticisms and kicks
I don't abhor
but enjoy for sure
a horse when whipped
wins the race
so of my poetry Neo's
set the pace
cloud 9 is your home jess
I guess
many poems there relax
to be read
when I am dead
my dearest
MASTER jess
just kindly confess
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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no rewrite
we to our own selves
must be
first
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weirdelf
Tue, 2017-07-11 00:59
Your kindness and forgiveness humbles me.
I do hope others have noticed I'm less often a cranky old ass these days.
It's important to me to cause no harm and help when I can.
I'm running out of time to make amends for harm I've caused in the past.
The weirdelf, a cranky old dick,
told truths that made people quite sick
if his words were not pleasing
even quite cruelly teasing
they sometimes worked like a Zen stick.
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Tue, 2017-07-11 14:10
smiles
and
'cheers '
be happy
that's all we
W I S H
author commentweirdelf
Fri, 2017-07-14 15:55
Tricksters
Loki, Hermes, Coyote, Anansi, Puck, Sun Wukong, Maui, Dionysus, Legba, Pan, Br'er Rabbit, Curupira, Kitsune, Kuma Lisa, Pantagruel, Robin Goodfellow, Puss in Boots, Reynard, Saci, Susanoo, Till Eulenspiegel, Tokoloshe, Jess
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Fri, 2017-07-14 22:30
meaning
cheeries
imageries
straw barrys
at tea phoneys This ?
author commentweirdelf
Fri, 2017-07-14 22:39
A reference to your lines
"Sir Jess
the best guy in a CIRCUS
is the Joker"
The joker or trickster is an honourable role in many pantheons and mythologies, except the Bible, they lack a sense of humour. [grins]
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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lovedly
Sat, 2017-07-15 10:13
that joker was
me not u jess
thanks
cheeeeeers
author commentweirdelf
Sat, 2017-07-15 11:07
then both of us
my dear.
And we are necessary.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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lovedly
Sat, 2017-07-15 22:23
sure we are
hands in gloves
cheeers
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