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A Simple Thing

Risky can be the way to love for
me and you and all
then on its behalf let life bestow
what it is that makes us grow…

be rules the way of truth now are
that not one soul gets hurt,
in the deep and darkest valley way
pride and glory find the day…

now if worth of you be the goal of all
pay your homage to this simple thing
and from all connected in the circle bring
our world like morning doves shall sing.

If your body and mind are for all to find
and likewise, so for you,
that when we then do have each other
the world shall now become anew.

Let contact for the world to see
be the touching of you and me
and let us so be heard by all
as understanding comes to be…

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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you have a greater sense of love and the art of loving and being loved than many I have known. excellent poem! my favorite lines are:

If your body and mind are for all to find
and likewise, so for you,
that when we then do have each other
the world shall now become anew.

*hugs, kitty-Cat

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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

What a compliment.
Mark

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seems reasonable that you have a big heart. I like this; showing emotions is something that not many big, burly guys like to show, they think it makes them less manly. I've always heard from women, that it actually makes them more attractive!
Our family are not afraid for the men to hug and kiss on the cheek. [Not all], but those of us that are especially close, like me and my sons, my brother and a few cousins. Nicely written and nothing that I would change. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

That is a valued comment,
Mark

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Plain and simple. You’ve got something really great here. I am a hopeful romantic and I love this sort of thing. “Risky can be the way of love” just like you say. Stupendous opening line. Bravo.

Tim

Your words are appreciated ..
Mark

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