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SIMILAR EPISODE COINCIDENCE

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2022-04-07 21:37

I was then nearly
19 she maybe like fifty
with a low down hubby

she clenched me under her arms
but excited though I was
couldn't come under her charms

but surprisingly
I still feel warm
though she has merged
since mighty long

how to me
that memory does still belong
now
still I wish
it will last long

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-04-08 09:18

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maybe the memory would stay with you longer if you write it down, maybe in a personal diary?

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Fri, 2022-04-08 10:38

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my memory is very good I remember all vital incidents of life

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