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A silent seed

A subtly
silent seed
blatantly
begins to bleed
out it’s
neurotic
numbing need .
To passionately
plunge through
the persistent
pounding palms
of pressure
and proceed
to succeed .
Gradually growing
into the grimy
grasps of greed.

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nicely done!

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author comment

I really like the rhythm of this. I imagine myself as the seed and that the preassures are lessons.

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