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SHINING DEW ON AUTUMN LEAVES

Dew shines on morning autumn leaves
sending spears of colors all around.
Though not quite cold enough to freeze,
ere long frost flowers will abound.

A slight pause in the wet weeds
flushes a woodcock from its night's rest.
It flutters off to meet its needs
in this season I like best.

I look down on this well worn trail
and spot an old stone arrowhead
its quartz the purest white and pale
though marred a bit by the clay's red.

I pick it up in calloused hand
and consider being here
in this remote forested land
where Cherokee once hunted deer.

Was this point lost in a hunt
or simply lost as some things are?
Perhaps it had become too blunt
and tossed as becoming subpar.

On pocketing it, the world seems changed.
As if I'm in another time.
Might this find have been prearranged
to make me pen this little rhyme?

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then whoever planted it there, knew that it would grow into a wonderful tale of the forest as seen by
a true nature lover. ~ Gee

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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Thanks for dropping by. There's just something about finding hints of long gone people (old foundations, crumbling chimney or Indian artifacts) that always gives me pause to wonder........stan

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having deep thought? Well maybe when fishing lol. I'm glad you enjoyed this and appreciate your dropping by

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I have a couple of bags of arrowheads I've picked up over the years. Most are broken but some could likely be used as they still retain perfect form and sharp edges. Thank you for your kind words

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