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Shed or shred

All Neopoets
join me to say

shred or shed your negativity away
compose some beautiful poetry to day

we all will
and
must
as have to
will pass away
one day

so while living
why sad should we stay
lets be happy
and
like yesterday be gay ,
if not like that
your country promotes today

Have a
Happy tone
from today
our way!

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I is tired today so words as the song says.
"Don't come easy" So I shall write on......
Did you see it
Out of the corner of your eye.
The chandelier fell
through the sunlight.
There for a second I saw.
Lights that had been hidden
Hidden for many years.

It was the soul of the chandelier
Splintered rainbows
Cascading dreams of light
Thought concentrated
Falling as a waterfall
The light cascaded
Down and more down
for ever it held the dream.

Then the noise of contact
There the light transformed
As the drop ceased in a splendour
As if life itself was the same.
Giving up the beauty held
There the Spirit had been freed.
The light spread outward
Its journey to join the universe.
.
Take care young Bard at least you will read
then you will talk to me in your way.
There in the shadows a son was born
There the shadows disappeared,
Yours Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

as all ur poetic words r
Ian .

My poetry is mostly prosaic
metaphors asleep
as at night
in the covers of darkness
till arises in my sight
yes that!
and the morning sunlight...
glad though sleepy Ian ....
u r still bright

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