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Seasonal Exciting Luv..RECAST

Spring...Summer...Autumn...Winter...Snow.........>>>>Spring again

In spring
you sprung
Yes or no

In summer you always sweat
of course both during day and night
all know

In autumn
we shed off like birds,
they feathers
we our bloating ego
and
autumn
as usual
too comes and goes
by now
well all know

In winter
we cover ourselves
to avoid full shame
as we lay
and
play nightly
games

well then in snow
we enjoy many a glide
in hills outside
Mount Galberth and so on
we sledge and wear snow man's clothing on
ere we expose
before the coming dawn
and
are very much gone

then again
the cycle restarts
we all spring
again a year advanced
A Happy Birthday next

but

old guys like us
may sulk
as we all near
our loving inevitable end

But seasons remain
indifferent
to man,
they come and go
warm up all say
Global or so

Then once the cycle
is complete
we earthlings won't know
before that we all go

Only seven or maximum nine
spans
Seasons carry on...
so never say
Adieu
Au Revoir
nor
Amen
you may see me tomorrow
once again

All life is seasonal
know ye
If you are human!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Third stanza could use reworking for clarification of message I think. But the rest is a clear and enjoyable read.............stan

And no waffle either, well done
Love judy
xxx
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'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

all by now know
Loved rarely cries
but for your acceptance
now I wipe my eyes
loved never cries
no waffle
you must be joking
were you just now sleeping
Judy ma'am my salaam
okay
GRAND SLAM!

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