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SEAMLESS

walking and talking
in fragments and pieces
like stick figures
manifesting our weakness
unable to communicate
effectively or with true passion
never seamlessly
in silk like fashion
though there may come a day
when we blend in synchronicity
and see as we are seen
and know as we are known
nevermore to travel alone
unique and yet united
in thought and emotion
where our minds and hearts
gently renew acquaintance
after the long walk home!

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I apologize up front, I've made a big revision without giving credit to an individual who suggested that our writing doesn't need to be capitalized . In any event I went back and couldn't find their comment. I am so sorry! I will do my best not to ever do that again.
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Not Explicit Content

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I apologize up front, I've made a big revision without giving credit to the person that suggested that our writing doesn't need to be capitalized. In any event I went back and couldn't find their comment. I am so sorry! I will do my best never to do this again!

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