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RUN THE SECOND MILE---- 2011

Time-less-ness of Time

Sorry for butting
if I may be permitted
as a scientist more
than a toddler poet,
daring to tread through
the poetic treadmill,
besides stalwarts,
not knowing much of the nuances of poetry,

none the less, I may continue, if you do permit

firstly,
I may suggest, we all read the book on Time
brief history of time by Stephen Hawkins

secondly,
science and spirituality
are at variance.
science is mathematical vision,
like the actual fact the earth
wobbles around the sun
the number of full moons
one sees in a life time,
subscribe to the basic element of time
scientifically adopted from sunrise to sunrise
and
today the Zodiac,
which is just over 2000 years
ensures the return of the sun,
having moved up from Cancer
down to the tropic of Capricorn,
and back which is not at all cyclic

also GMT was introduced
about just over 100 years
when air travel came to life

as far as spiritualism is concerned,
I'm hardly anybody to comment,
but all spirituality should be reserved,
for after any life, when we all are safely dispersed in heaven

on terra firma let’s be pragmatic humans,
all poets are a part of existentialism....

hope my intrusion, justifies my intention,
of not intruding in the domain,
where I continue to an infant,
a poetic baby still remain

Babe of 83+
only

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I'm sure that lovedly will be required reading for amateur poets. ~ Geez.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

you honor a
novice to be like an
AMATEUR
.
I am told you are saying
un-professinal poets
as amateur
define+unskilful
GOOGLE SAYS

''FREESTYLE POET me ....follows NO style laid down routine archaic poetry...

Thanks for the warning
Shall try to improve
as in stereo typed poetry
but
can't help it
the world poets still read me

author comment

It’s like a touch under 2600 years to pass an astrological age. I believe we are just starting the age of Aquarius??

25,600/12==12 equinoxes nearly

yes now it is Aquarius
real beauty
but mind
fully dull
of human
so born
mostly

author comment

Hi, Lovedly,
I love the line "the number of full moons one sees in a lifetime." There is such a connection there with the universe and the soul. A poetic baby still remain - aren't we all, and won't we always be?
Lav

I'm sure that lovedly will be required reading for amateur poets. ~ Geez.

love the line "the number of full moons one sees in a lifetime." Lavs ...thanks

author comment

to be taken as an insult or to demean your style. I meant that you will be required reading to make sure that amateur poets
get a full education on how different, but great a poet can be, while not conforming to the rigors and standards of the art.
Remember, I have said many times, that I always read your work? I really do! I don't always comment, but I do read you.
You always have something for me, in each and every piece you write. ~ Geez.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Gee I'm grateful to thee

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