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Riviera of Lively Sojourn

River of benevolence......
I compare one’s whole life...
to a River
as it emanates as forest dew drops......
then enlarges to bigger ones...
and
falls as a waterfall...
and
with the kinetic energy gained
and
with the momentum
gushes forth at break neck speed...
then meanders....
cuts corners...
erodes...
strikes boulders
and
gradually slows down...
till at the estuary
it splits into tributaries...
tired as it merges
back into the sea or ocean...
of no return

as a non entity
one of no return...
simply merge to once again
someday as clouds emerge
to form and bring about
Petrichor!

What more!

Riviera of lively sojourn

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Free verse
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this is absolutely gorgeous! Simile at its best!
Wow!

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and encouraging response, I composed it I think in 2013 and read by 1222 so far elsewhere
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