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Beside you I lie
And we melt into one
Float in dark velvet
Warm as the sun

Feeling so fetal
Encased in a womb
Breathing as one
In our safe sacred room

Sharing a moment
Or two with my “twin”
Absent your presence
I’ll wander again

Lost in myself
But discovered in you
Now one mind and body
The product of two

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I have a need for cuddles. Wife also has this need. It is religious in nature. We deify each other with reverent silence
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Lost in myself
But discovered in you
Now one mind and body
The product of two

The closing few lines sums it all for me
Well penned!


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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me feel warm and cuddly! I have this sudden urge to go hug and kiss my wife! Unfortunately, she doesn't share my enthusiasm for that kind of thing when she is busy. I have to wait my turn. That's alright, I'm patient. Your title is okay, I get the meaning, but could wish for something a bit cuddlier! The mood is right, the theme is great, and I wouldn't wish for anything more. Nice write! ~ Geez.

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Hi, Tim,
Re-anything with a spouse is wonderful and this title and poem covers it all. Very nice.

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