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replace my skull

as science advances
all neuron lines or nerves
once connected
if heart beat is still on
by means in ICU
I don't have a clue
why in doubt are you

The human mind is rife
suffer no anger
have no strife
times a changing
man is reinventing
haven't you,
heard of IVF
so many gals have given birth
but only inside their own wombs

life is like a river for ever flowing
see here afresh
I am not this time waffling
on such a page as yours
only with a view to inject optimism
coming from a poet
who mostly is piffling
but this one seems sound
just pray

the doc will be successful
all say

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east is more primitive then the western
west is raw..only so few hundred years

but the east has always pushed
although some believe the west
does in secret...perhaps...

I read much fantasy in the past
and fiction and science real..
unreal..horror.

the cloning thing in the eighties
got me thinking about how it
would be to take something
we like..admire...ideology
clone a mate we percieve
as perfect..
a kind of twin ideal
only keep splicing it
like one would a beautiful
tree...
said mad scientist would
grow older and older
but his clones would be
this age...well in a
gate of time....young
or the ideal of perfection
too culture..

they clone pets now
sheep of course and
probably commercial
food....eventually body
harvesting too..

just imagination but
people out there working
on all of this
our love of the self
and image so strong
Eighteen hundreds it
was marble sculpture
brass plaster...
epitome for the wealthy

just one of the many
evening musings...

thank u!

man can clone
but the brain always works on its own
the synapses react to each situation
none have control
clone or evolve
the richer may live
but just think
the man with a new head may come out of coma
but
Who AM I
he will ask in an unknown language
perhaps he will be not even able to decipher
messages recorded in the new physical brain

But let us not hold back the experiment
man may gain to regain
and come alive once again
instead of in coma preferring to remain

at docs mercy
no eusthanasia

See my pictures
to see how colourfully
Nature speaks

all is not for ever green
autumn makes nature supreme
as do women
when they apply artificial cream
come alive don not dream
nature alone is supreme

God is everywhere we all say
but has anyone seen him all say nay
He waits for us at heaven’s gate
have you seen that gate
but when you enter that domain
only burnt ashes of you remain
unseen god still does sustain

then you can' decipher
the difference
so while alive why this indifference
enjoy nature through my poetry
and photography
consider me a god
if you wish me
one to be....
O human!

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error in site now deleted pease

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yes i noted the site error....
I cannot post today..
perhaps I am history anew...
but I can comment
which seems okay
maybe with the glitch I can
go through the undiscovered
and bring them back onto
the main page..

Thank U!

go ahead
fire the poetic salvo

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