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Repeating sexy soliloquy

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2015-08-28 00:48

Repeating sexy soliloquy

you have again said
though unknowingly
what has already been said
as you say by others

I also say we are saying
what has been once said

we are also doing it...
over and over again
how else would our population
be 7.5 billions?
if we all had used condoms
or
soliloquy played through musical nights
and
let off our steam
as in dream

we all have done all that
what they have before
or else how would we now be repeating
what has been done and said ere!

repeating sexy soliloquy
wow he did it again

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lovedly

Fri, 2015-08-28 00:49

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Repeating sexy soliloquy

you have again said
though unknowingly
what has already been said
as you say by others

I also say we are saying
what has been once said

we are also doing it...
over and over again
how else would our population
be 7.5 billions?
if we all had used condoms
or
soliloquy played through musical nights
and
let off our steam
as in dream

we all have done all that
what they have before
or else how would we now be repeating
what has been done and said ere!
repeating soliloquy wow he did it again

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Sparrow

Fri, 2015-08-28 03:38

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I thought a silly quay was a stupid place to tie a boat up lol.
A strange wriyte young Bard and not one I like but you always write more so I shall wait for the next one.
Take care I must stream something again soon lol.
Yours as always, Ian..

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lovedly

Fri, 2015-08-28 11:09

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it now seems

one day
some day
may be soon any day
all will go far away
except
IAN
STAN
and
I
the bard man!

All else will say
where is neopoet of yesterday
none will answer that I say
not even Jess
ask him
He will also confess!
My guess...

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