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relax sweet hearts

ReeeeeeeeeeeeLLLL A X

Indispensable me

One day someone asked
did you miss me??

What? we did not even know
your were absent

the world perhaps
had a relaxation
Oh what a breather
it must have been

Relaxation.....
makes you feel fresh
it gives you many names
and
monotony goes to candle flames....

no the world won't collapse
without you!!!
I assure you
it has moved along
without me too
see I come so often
forgotten me have you?....

Allllllllllllllll work and no play
makes for a hazzzzy dayyyyyy
All poets learn to relax
the world won't crash in a day
when you are away

all will ask for you
where were you
and
you will smile your way
at least they asked
won't you???

so learn to relax
Recharge your batteries
Go down flat...
Enjoy your weekends
as I doooooooo
ReeeeeeeeeeeeLLLL A X
at least now will you!

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Comments

some kind of mission...will.....taking it all in..
when I do and am gone...my writing will just stop
and I will be at rest...
so they say..

I like that..like a musical term
the long pause...

the big LP...

Like your poetry Loved!
you look at things in a different
perspective that is uniquely
yours!

thank U!

ur more uniquer than lovedly
and i love ur poetry
even if it doesn't enter
my synapses

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