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Redwood Counselors

I didn't earn it at first.
Love was like wind.
I could sense it all around her,
but I could not see any use for it.

Still, with patience, we walked
in tall stands of trees together.
Ones that had been there for so long,
red-barked and towering with wisdom.

The branches quivered and stirred
as we passed their anchored homes.
Murmurs perhaps, of their discontent with me.

I reached out to feel the deep crevices
furrowed in the rough and weathered bark.
Counsel, it seemed, for a fool.

The Redwoods all around us whispered
through a restless and knowing breeze,
“Let her in and don’t look back.”

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Hello, Michael.
Wise counseling, indeed! "I reached out to feel the deep crevices..." This entire stanza brings me comfort and love. I can feel it as I read your beautiful poetry.
Thank you!
L

Very kind L, thank you. ALWAYS appreciate your comments.

Best

Michael Anthony

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