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READ ICU ONE FIRST THEN SECOND

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2023-02-24 11:28

I C U SECOND
I just heard docs silently whisper
Coma
now nothing one can do
but
shift her to the
QUEUE
in the ward
as just another one
richest
lady once...

what a decision
not even a private room

Alas
''There is no cure for Birth and Death but to enjoy the interval...''
so spoke my spouse.....''
Gasp!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Final results expected by tomorrow or Sunday Wait and C
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Seren

Fri, 2023-02-24 11:35

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Unfortunately, that's the times we live in, well done I think they go well together!!

You're really writing some good poems.

hugs and love Sis

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Fri, 2023-02-24 12:05

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Blessings
you give dear Aussie Sis

''I am thinking of coming out with a ''SOUVENIR 23 BEST POEMS ''
You have read ...mostly Can you suggest which would meet the criteria
NEOS all who read me sincerely
will get a free book from me
ere .....you know
I too go.............
lol yet

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Seren

Fri, 2023-02-24 12:11

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Why 23?

hugs Sis

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Fri, 2023-02-24 12:14

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23 would do
Costly affair publishing is you know
poor man
Can an AUSSIE pub be found
I wonder sis

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Lavender

Fri, 2023-02-24 17:49

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Hello, Lovedly,
So sorry to hear this about your dear friend.
Lav

lovedly

Sat, 2023-02-25 00:25

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move on Can't help it Can we?

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Leslie

Fri, 2023-02-24 18:36

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SCARY STUFF NO DOUBT. THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING SITUATION WE ALL MAY WILL PROBABLY END UP ON BOTH SIDES OF THE STICK. I ENJOYED THE CREATIVE USE OF WORDS THE RHYTHYM AND PUNCUATION!

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