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Random challenge 6 Topic 1- I can

Submitted by Triskelion on Thu, 2021-08-05 14:20

I can every thing that can be canned
I can summer and fall, at my canning stand
I can can a bull cannibal like nobody can
I can lips, noses, eyeballs and can can a hand
I can audience laughter for playing in loop
I can things quite disgusting, I can even can poop
I can leeches and frogs and once even a brain
I can toenails and fungus. I'm canning insane!
I can up my thoughts and my dreams when I can
I can and I do, so I can 'cause I can

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Last few words: 
I thought that I could. It seems that I can.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Tue, 2022-03-01 11:51

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I got a big kick out of reading this, thanks for the laughs!

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