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Prudence

Submitted by Rosewood Apothecary on Thu, 2022-12-15 06:27

For all things exist
In their season and time
The painter and canvas
The poet and rhyme

For every soul moves
To it’s precious heart song
The dancer’s worn slippers
Conductor’s baton

Things fall in place
If you let yourself be
Devoted to prudence
You’ll find destiny

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-12-15 06:36

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Good Morning to you! I love this:

For all things exist
In their season and time
The painter and canvas
The poet and rhyme

you have started my day off with a surge of gentle energy!

*love, Cat

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Rosewood Apothecary

Thu, 2022-12-15 06:58

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I’m so glad to have crossed paths with you. Give Steven my love and respect too. What an amazing gift I’ve been granted with everyone here.

With utmost endearment,
Tim

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-12-15 13:15

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he says "hello and happy yule" I'm smiling >{^*;*^}<

*love, Cat

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Geezer

Thu, 2022-12-15 10:42

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for the uplifting message and reminder. I am sure that my muse listens in on your life and brings me pieces that you miss or discard. She's a great one at picking up the crumbs. It is our pleasure to know you. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2022-12-15 13:10

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lovely one Tim

Lavender

Thu, 2022-12-15 17:51

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Hi, Tim,
I love everything about this, but mostly how warm and positive it is. We all need this!
L

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