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Poppy

This December was one to remember
Awaiting a new family member

A pretty lady will soon appear
To make our lives less severe

Christmas has passed and and news has come
The Mom has been admitted with a lot less glum

The the 29 th day has come with joy and pride
As Poppy appeared by her side

What a beautiful girl she will be
A great granddaughter we now can see

A Christmas present we will always remember
No month greater than this December

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My wife delivers babies! I wish you and your family so much joy.

Great job,
Tim

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