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THE POETIC SAILOR
silence sails
on poet's bed
a traveling mind
with ethereal beauty
set for poetic adventures
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-01-28 07:18
dear friend,
a beautiful short piece that makes me think of sailing the warm waters of one's dreams! good work!
*hugs, Cat
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Jackweb
Sat, 2023-01-28 10:35
O yes!
Thank you very much Cat!.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Sat, 2023-01-28 08:11
Nice job...
of sailing into a safe harbor. Easy to read and drift away. ~ Geez.
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Jackweb
Sat, 2023-01-28 10:36
Thanks
So much for reading and commenting.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Lavender
Sun, 2023-01-29 16:20
The Poetic Sailor
Hi, Jackweb,
This is smooth and easy-going. A lovely read. The shape of the poem adds to the mood and feeling.
Thank you!
L
Jackweb
Mon, 2023-01-30 08:20
Heart felt thanks
For taking your time to read and comment.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-31 23:52
O yeah!
Much appreciated for reading and commenting.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb