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Perception Of Love Is Different.....edit

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2022-02-17 13:51

Billions have walked this way
none can really say
till today
what love is

may I say
it's fathomless emotion
for different occasions
even harmony as you say
plays an ever long lasting part
in all lives gone past
and
those which want to enter fast
for all only
Interpretation of love
would continue to be a profound task

But all must love
till their own very last
just perceive
love fast

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
LOVE SO FAR REMAINS UNDEFINABLE
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Ray Whitaker

Fri, 2022-02-18 14:10

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Like this. A lot.

only a couple of very small suggestions:

loose the all caps, and go with capitalizations only where the all caps were [IMHO- gives the same effect.].

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lovedly

Fri, 2022-02-18 14:48

lovedly's picture

done

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