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Orion

I rise early to darkness
Autumn winds carry leaves
To their eternal resting places
My cares are likewise swept away
Chasing leaf litter, coaxed into flight
An ancient archer’s angular stance
Patiently waiting with bow drawn
Bearing witness to the ages
Takes notice of my awakening

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
The Archer is ever watchful. Waiting out the ages without loosing his arrow.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I always feel energized and safe when Orion is brightly in the sky...my favorite constellation (and father) I really love this poem and the wisdom of Orion,

*love & hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

are the gift of the gods. A light show for the ages. I love this story, just a little slice of your life. ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

just great
to see you traverse my page
no longer can I wait!
lol

One with the Universe.
L

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