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OPTIMISM OF PLANTING TREES

It's a cool spring southern day
I, yet, wipe sweat from my bare brow
and pause to watch a sedge field sway
while listening to a lowing cow.

I lean on a shovel for support.
Knees ache from digging the six holes
which now hold trees, more than one sort,
their trunks too small to be called boles.

Two apple, two peach and two pear
now paced along my gravel drive.
In a year or two perhaps they'll bear
if by then they're still alive.

For who's to say that drought won't come
or ice to shatter slender trunk.
Disease could easily wipe out some.
Roots could be dug out by a skunk.

Yet I believe they'll all survive
to each become a mature tree
their blossoms feeding some bee's hive.
It's likely they will out live me.

Haiku Version

By the sweat of my brow
I invest in the future
hoping young trees live

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Like a lot of my stuff this is based on real experience as I did plant some fruit trees earlier this year. Mainly for spring color and to give deer a treat.
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Comments

both your rhyme, as usual and the Haiku and really would have a hard time saying which one more.
~ Gee.
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Sometimes I like to post a single poem in 2 different forms. Don't want people to think I'm a rhyme snob.....stan

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