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Only Way Nirvana ---refreshed

Where is the need
to pray
nude
lying on the sand
endeavoring to cover
secretly

Where is the need
to meditate
cross legged
one can meditate
even when walking

Love resides
in hearts
the Sun has given one
the energy to contain
as long as one lives
there is no need
to show
artificiality
all are of same kind of
humans

as you just pray
let all come and bow
they may

not to you
but heaven
from where you came
and
when you are back home
Sun will of course welcome
not only you

but all who were frames
of light and energy
once
Sun gave birth
in so many forms
of animals,
fl-aura and fauna
and
evolved all in ages
to become
You, O man

when you were born
you were abs nude
why are you now
ashamed
be yourself
as you are the
Father
of man!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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This is a revised version as per suggestions of some great accomplished neopoet
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Comments

You have given your readers much food for thought in this write

a poem is a commandment
in short terse
verse
so that all get the gist
why waffle
hence
are born
poets

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