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once again your choice

Memories of gone times

Such a lovely memory
unread by any
sad 'tis
sweet child yours
now must be 18

Memories live
all else passes away
life is given to be taken away

This is the wish of Almighty
what can we do
Memories alone will be left behind
in vaults deep under the forgotten ocean of time
who will ever read
can you tell me...

The second thought

And do you know what God...
Your god would reply...
had I been given the power to say....

‘’O child
You alone are my representative...
on Mommy Earth
take care...

I gave you a brain...
use it.

I am well over burdened with all you send up here...
straightening and strengthening them...
for a second may be a third or still fifth innings...
may be you may meet them...
retrain them well
with all your earthly experience
before you send them again...

Tell them to use their brain...
Full brain...
more than half of them come here
fully with their unused brain

O CHILD, do HELP ME...
I as your God pray...
You are my only child!

USE YOUR FULL BRAINS...

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Comments

Mr lovedly!
Full brain not functioning
Use it I try
but I lie
If I be lazy I'd die
Use it I will
as you capitals tell

will it have better effect or affect
whichever suits you
a bit
or
byte
better
which
but do not
scaTTER
mr hatteR
ad a mixture
caPS and shmallS
wHich oNE's would U
preee fer

author comment

Caps On
at the beginning of each line
bugs Me but likE i said
i'm lazy......
SO tO play with capitals takes time
aNd energy

in poetry
no need
at all I
tell so many

all Ignore
for madness there is NO CuRE

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